
Though Pons is a good storyteller, the book is a little patchy with its editing, with speech spattered in the middle of sentences and descriptions loosely placed in and around uncomfortable run-on sentences with tenses that frequently mix. Regardless of its writing, it still has a good heart, with a compelling tale to tell even if the writing can’t always express it clearly or succinctly. It’s a warming story with a good message that does a lot to question modern existence through Moira’s culture shock and personal revelations.
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