
While the novel covers many heavily emotional issues, it suffers a fair amount from “show don’t tell.” We’re told about horrific events, such as drug abuse and spousal abuse, and the emotional fallout, yet major moments are covered in only a few sentences. Additionally, there are fair number of grammatical errors, with dialogue between different characters put into a single paragraph. If these things were cleared up, it would only add to Emily and Sarah’s interesting story arc.
Those criticisms aside, it’s clear that Feldmann has great empathy and compassion for her characters and that comes through on every page. Feldmann is clearly a passionate writer. So passionate that she might need to slow down a bit when crafting each scene. Overall, it’s a moving and hopeful story, as the title suggests.
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