
The interesting thing for me with this book is that I am married to a New Yorker who lived blocks from The World Trade Center on 9/11, and has written a fictional book featuring 9/11 (We met when I was researching human disasters and found his book), so I was able to ask him how accurate this portrayal is.
I wonder if 9/11 is a literary sacred cow, and therefore it’s difficult to criticize a story that revolves around it. But this is a poignant and thoughtful plot, with much to admire, even if some of the actual descriptions of 9/11 are not quite as real and powerful as I would have hoped for, the sense of loss is described with some depth. But there are touches of local NYC that will raise a smile or a tear for anyone who has lived there.
The author, obviously well-read and looking to enrich his work overreaches with his referencing. Literary and musical references abound, from Greek tragedy to David Bowie. Luckily for me, I am very well-read with a classical education, and have an encyclopaedic passion for music, but if I didn’t, I wonder how well I would have coped with these references. Because it matters that you “get” them – it’s the way Sivad writes. Maybe by tightening his chapters and losing a little of this – or explaining it more comprehensively, more readers would be able to grasp the often beautiful juxtaposing of these snippets. I do think the novel is zealously over-written, but Sivad should be able to temper his writing to a more accessible standard – It strikes me as a “first novel” sort of process that should refine with time and experience.
This is a love story – unrequited, desperately sad and tragic, but also fills the reader with an entire world – characters are extremely well-rounded with individual voices. Michelle endears immediately, and Sivad conveys her entire personality and looks in a very short time frame before she dies, enabling the reader to feel the pain Andrew feels throughout the book. I like that Sivad writes all types of characters: gay, straight, female and male all have souls, and women characters are written with flesh and blood – they have interior worlds, and are driven as much as the males, which is a rare gem in a male-led book written by a man.
There is a terrific subplot to this book, of a play written that is pretty terrible, that leads to another idea that is fantastic, pivotal and engrossing. I shan’t say any more because it truly is a great idea and well worth delving into. An unusual work with merit of a kind seldom available in self-published works. It will be interesting to see how Sivad develops as he experiences what it is to write in this world more extensively.
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